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SC

• Introduction-identifying
• Explanation-sequence 3 paragraphs 5
• Summary (conclusion)
• Re crafting-punctuation/grammar spelling, vocabulary/make sense
• Individual goal     

Plan

• Intro - what causes pollution
• Being sustainable with rubbish - what is wrong? What can we do?
• Being sustainable with fishing - what is wrong? What can we do?
• Being sustainable with shipping - what is wrong? What can we do?
• Conclusion

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How can we be sustainable around the ocean?

Animal Sustainability

What Causes Pollution

people pallute  by driving cars because of the gas. So people should drive less cars and mostly bike or walk.Also by washing their cars near drains will affect the animals because all of the soap and other chemicals that goes into the drains and then flows to the sea.

You also mustn't litter

don’t litter because all of the rubbish go’s to the sea and the animals eat it. Then they die. If we keep on littering more and more of the animals are going to die because all of the rubbish flows to the sea and the animals eat it.  Then lot’s of marine animals will be extinct!

That is terrible.

How Can We Be Sustainable Around The Ocean

It’s very important that we don’t  litter so Animals do not die.

You must never throw anything down the drain on purpose.You must throw all your rubbish in the bin.Litter can kill animals and it’s also bad for the environment.Then we will have a terrible environment too.    

Use less Plastic Products

Plastics that end up as ocean debris contribute to habitat destruction and entangle and kill tens of thousands of marine animals each year. To limit your impact, carry a reusable water bottle, put food in  containers that are usable more than once.Try to also bring reusable shopping bags when you go shopping.If we try to keep our beaches clean they could look something like this. but if we pollute and don’t care about them they’ll look something like this.That is also terrible for the marine animals because the rubbish can flow into the sea.