Wednesday, 18 May 2011
Skinny vs. Fat Sentences??
Which do you think is best?
Skinny sentences are simple, straight-forward and quite boring! Fat ones have much more detail and description... I know what I'd rather read.
Take a look at 3/4G's Blog and have a go at turning their skinny sentence into a fat one by adding adjectives - good luck.
"The boy opened the door."
If you post on their blog, copy the sentence into the comments here too please so we can check out your learning. Rather have a go at 'showing, not telling'? Go for it!