Persuasive Writing SC
- Facts/reasons that support your argument
- Strong verbs
- Personal pronouns (I, I’m, you)
- Language features: rhetorical questions, adjectives
- Vocab
- Introduction, Arguments, Conclusion
- Present tense
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Why we should help world hunger
Could you imagine being so hungry that you can see every little detail of your bones? What if you didn't have enough energy or nutrients to talk, or even walk? This is not a joke, or a pleasant position to be in. Stop world hunger. How would you feel if you were homeless and starving?
I personally think we should help people in Africa etc, because it would be a great way of giving back to the hungry. They do everything they can to get a little piece of food. Put yourself into their shoes. In developing countries, poor people approximately receive $1.25 a day or less. For the hours a day they work for, they get nothing in return but a single dollar, which they will probably spend on their starving families. So I think that we should do something about this worldwide epidemic. Donate to the starving families or you can help them by giving them food and education. Poverty is the main cause of hunger. If you donate one dollar it could provide them with a loaf of bread. As Gandhi said “There are people in the world so hungry, that God cannot appear to them except in the form of bread.
Poverty includes people's lack of resources, such as food, water, and even proper climate. Giving an unequal pay can also lead to poverty. The source of world hunger is poverty, and the source of poverty fails to care property. Many people in poverty get only one meal a day if they are lucky and that meal will hardly nourish them. Water is one of the lack of resources because you can’t grow any crops without water.
When you provide people with knowledge necessary you change them forever. If you help the people that are hungry will change their whole life and they will go in he right direction. It is your choose to help, it will give happiness to you and it will change their lives. So what are you going to do?
Hi Ida you did good introduction/things that support your argument like when you put facts on there everyday life. I think that you need to put past tense because people might not know about their past. Like what happened with Nelson Mandela, What did he fight for?
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Caleb
Hi Ida, You got a great introduction I really liked it just strate-away makes you think.
ReplyDeleteYour facts and reasons are really good to like when you said, (What if you didn't have enough energy or nutrients to talk, or even walk?) and when you said all of this (When you provide people with knowledge necessary you change them forever. If you help the people that are hungry will change their whole life and they will go in he right direction.Well done! I don't really know what to say you must improve on because I think you story is perfect!