tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3278023761202741403.post1995168856775943754..comments2023-05-01T00:36:11.593+12:00Comments on Learning Hub 3 2013 @ Stonefields School: School Apps Ownerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08629777795087603003noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3278023761202741403.post-47479516352777138402013-11-07T10:42:47.468+13:002013-11-07T10:42:47.468+13:00Hi Ida, You got a great introduction I really like...Hi Ida, You got a great introduction I really liked it just strate-away makes you think.<br />Your facts and reasons are really good to like when you said, (What if you didn't have enough energy or nutrients to talk, or even walk?) and when you said all of this (When you provide people with knowledge necessary you change them forever. If you help the people that are hungry will change their whole life and they will go in he right direction.Well done! I don't really know what to say you must improve on because I think you story is perfect!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3278023761202741403.post-52576669685684777642013-11-07T10:21:21.432+13:002013-11-07T10:21:21.432+13:00Hi Ida you did good introduction/things that suppo...Hi Ida you did good introduction/things that support your argument like when you put facts on there everyday life. I think that you need to put past tense because people might not know about their past. Like what happened with Nelson Mandela, What did he fight for? <br />good job <br />Caleb Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com