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PS3 has been one of the wonderlands for gamer. I have played PS3 and Xbox for a long time and PS3 was my favorite out of both . People buy PS3 more than Xbox 360 . You should buy the PS3 than Xbox 360 from my point of view playing on a PS3 and Xbox. PS3 is one of the cheapest console and that are really good for playing games. PS3 is owned by sony one of the trusted brand for TV, stereo, action cameras, cameras and everything electronics .
Is PS3 faster than Xbox that you can’t be certain on because it depends on how much GB you have. PS3 is has blu ray so you have HD if you watch a movie you can see like your were in the movies so people who love watch movie in HD. For PS3 you can have GB version than Xbox does for instance PS3 has 360 is max for Xbox 360 is the max so PS3 is faster and you can download movies videos and more. PS3 games have won Goty award, there most every won .
The controllers of a PS3 is rechargeable so you don’t have to buy battery every times your battery dies. For Xbox you need to new battery each time that it dies or you can buy a rechargeable controllers that would be more expensive. So you do save money too.
That’s why I think PS3 is better than Xbox 360.
BY Miduran
I like how you supported you argument by saying why it is better than Xbox 360. You need to improve on your grammar were you say you can download movies videos and more. PS3 games have won Goty award, there most every won . But overall you did a great job
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ReplyDeleteI think your facts are great because you have used a PS3. I think you need to work on your Punctuation because all you have is fullstops captilts and commers so ucan add things like ! ?
ReplyDeleteMiduran you did a great job on the Reasons you gave. Like: The controllers of a PS3 is rechargeable so you don’t have to buy battery every times your battery dies.
ReplyDeleteYou did pretty well but you could still write some more facts on.
I think that your facts are really good on PS3 . There is one thing i can think on what you should work on is Punctuation otherwise it is really good
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ReplyDeleteI think your spelling is really good,because you used tricky words like rechargeable,but you need to use more strong words like instead of saying "That’s why I think PS3 is better than Xbox 360. You should say "That’s why PS3 is better than Xbox 360. " Because you are trying to make them buy PS3 instead of Xbox 360. Great work!
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