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Language features: rhetorical questions, adjectives
Introduction, Arguments, Conclusion
PLAN Intro - School is very important…..
Reasons - learning, friends, give your parents a break
Conclusion - I believe….
Should we have to go to school 5 days a week?
You do need to go to school five days a week because school is very important. If you don’t go to school you won’t learn and you won’t be smart when you grow up and you won’t get a job. When you grow up and have children they might ask you learning questions and you might not know the answer,that will embarrassing. If you don’t get a job when you grow up you won’t make money if you don’t make money you can’t buy a house and a car. You will be really poor.
It shouldn't even be 4 days a week because it all adds up to a lot of days a week that you don't go to. Plus you wouldn't learn as much if you went to school 4 days a week than 5 days a week. It mustn't be 7 days a week because we need a break. Also you will find lot’s of friends at every school you go to. You must also give your parents a break because they always look after you every day and that's probably really hard work for them.
School is also really fun, if you spent your whole day at home every day of your life it won’t be so fun because most people would be at school. Then you will get really bored.
That's why I think people should go to school 5 days a week. What do you think?