Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Alvin and Macklin's Persuasive writing

Persuasive Writing SC
Purpose: Make the reader agree with you, because you want something from the reader

  • Facts/reasons that support your argument
  • Strong verbs
  • Personal pronouns (I, I’m, you)
  • Language features: rhetorical questions, adjectives
  • Vocab
  • Introduction, Arguments, Conclusion
  • Present tense

  • Intro-Dogs are betters cats.
  • Reasons-Dogs are cute, they can protect you(Sometimes).
  • Conclusion-I believe…...

Are dogs better than cats?

You will think dogs are better cats.

Dogs are better than cats because they are cute and friendly, they can protect you from danger, they help the policemen to find crimes and people with poison, so they could take them to jail, and they can also find the things you got lost. Huskies are a type of dog they can help you in Antarctic by pulling your sled on the freezing ice. If you are blind, dogs can help you when you are crossing the street if they stop you, then listen to them because that means there will be cars coming soon.

You should get a dog for a pet. They are great friends you can play games with them like fetch. You can also train them to rollover sit and other cool things. You can take your dog to the park and you can pat them stroke them and you have to love them.

Dogs are very useful cops may use them for tracking smells of a criminal.

I believe that dogs are better than cats.


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  2. I agree with Reha. It's short and you have to check your punctuation.

  3. HI Macklin and Alvin
    I like how you have used a lot of facts like,dogs protect you and how they help police.
    So you have done well on facts. You can improve on you guys should have done some facts on cats aswell how they are bad so you can grab more attention.



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