Descriptive Writing about Daniel

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Daniel is ten years old. He goes to Stonefields School.

Looks

Daniel has short black hair. He has black eyes. When Daniel is at school, he wears his school uniform, but he doesn’t wear shoes. Daniel is short but he is a very fast runner. His skin is brown like chocolate.

Family

Daniels mum’s name is Theresa. His dad name is Ronan. His sister’s name is Julea. She is five years old.  His uncle’s name is Ronald. His grandads name is Julio. He lives with his mum, his dad and his sister. His dad works at electrix. his sister  go to stonefields school in hub one.  He likes living with his family.His sister is sometimes nice. He lives on the Ellerslie Panmure Highway. His mum was born in the  philippines in May 23th 1979. His dad was born in the philippines on the May 16th. His sister was born on July 14th 2007. He was born on March 8th 2003.

Hobbies

Daniel likes going out to play with his bike outside. He likes ice cream, pizzas, fried rice, chocolates and chips. He likes to play rugby and basketball. He like going to school.

Daniel is a friendly boy in my hub.

By Reece

18/3/13

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                                Lucas

Lucas is 9 and 3 quarters years old, his last name is Phan and he likes to play with Shakeel and Alvin. He also likes to eat instant noodles for breakfast, takeaways for lunch and butter chicken for for dinner. Lucas plays UNO after dinner and watched a movie before bedtime. His favourite hobby is having birthday parties with his friends.

About Him

Lucas has black, soft hair and he has brownish skin with a watch on his wrist. He wears white socks and black shoes. Lucas is shorter than me but that’s because he is younger than me. Lucas is a funny person. He tells me funny jokes and he laughs a lot. Once he said why is the elevator not going? And I said that is because someone cut the rope. But it was wrong and the answer is that nobody was in the elevator.

Family

Lucas’s dads name is Denis and Mums name is Amy. His dad works at Dads pies from  4-5 am until 5 pm. His mum works at the Meadowbank Dental Centre from 9am until 3pm. Lucas has a little sister and he loves his sister. He likes his sister when she is nice to him.

Hobbies

Lucas sometimes go to Lucas Q and Eric’s house to play and sometimes they come to his house. Lucas is a good friend and likes to see his friends lots. He likes to watch movies, catch dragonflies, draw pictures and play computer games. In the weekends he likes to go to the pool. Sometimes he likes to go to the shops with his whole family.

Lucas is the funniest friend that I ever met.

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      reha*                        

Reha is a girl from Labasa in Fiji.She was born on 24’th of April in 2003.She moved to nz at 8 months. Reha has no brothers and sisters. Her favorite animal is a dog. The type of dog she likes is a golden retriever. Reha is 9 and a half. She is 10 in a month. She lives in Stonefields.

hobbies

Reha likes biking a lot. Also she likes doing art. Reha hates some types of sport, but there are some Sports she likes, such as cricket with her dad because he is good at cricket. Her dad helps her in cricket when she doesn't know what to do and helps her throw the ball. Reha like biking because she says it is very fun and  it is like fitness. She has a bike. She doesn't like to go to the BMX park on her bike.

                 

looks

Reha has dark brown eyes and black medium size hair. She wears her hair tied up in a ponytail because she says she likes to wear her hair like that. if she was in a competition she would come 1st. Reha has dark brown skin. She wears fake pearl earing. She has short eyelashes. She has 3 beauty spots. On her face and one on her leg and lastly one on her arm . She also has a fringe that she likes  to wear it on the right side of her face.

family

Reha has a dad a mum and she is the only child. Her mum’s name is Renu and her dad’s name is  Shailendra. Her family came from Fiji. Reha has 3 girl cousins and 2 boy cousins. She has 3 uncles and 3 auntys.  Her mum works at labtests. And her dad works and  Glendowie college .Her family is fun and funny she said aspherly she dad. Her family buy’s her a lot of stuff.

Reha is a very nice girl  and a great friend. She is a very lovely person who is worth getting to know.

written by Daniella

18.3.13

Description of Vicky Kralev

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Introduction:

Vicky is a girl who goes to Stonefields School at the base of Mt Wellington in Auckland with me and her younger brother Tony.

Was born:

Vicky was born in Bulgaria where she grew up.Vicky was born on the 2nd of may 2003.

Is from:

Vicky and her family has immigrated to New Zealand from Sofia , Bulgaria and are now living here in Auckland with her family in a big and extraordinary house. Bulgaria is in Europe it is close to Russia, Ukraine and Turkey.  I think it is a Gigantic move compared to my move.Vicky and her family (Not including her cousin)have been in Auckland & New Zealand for 6 month’s.

Look’s like:

Vicky has dark mouse hair it is also straight it is short as well. She has Light skin & dark brown eyes.  She is very tall and slim that she would make a great basketball player. She has a very big smile that is a bit like a banana.

Family:

In her family is her brother Tony her Mum Chrissy and her Dad Svetlozar. She has a cousin named Kalina who is 3 yrs. old, and is also very cute.

Likes:

Vicky likes Listening to music. She is interested in reading also likes skyping and talking to her friends in Bulgaria so they can keep in touch and to see how things have changed.Vicky also likes going to the library and getting lot’s of book’s to read.

Does not like:

Vicky hate’s tomatoes Because they taste yuck (Vicky),but I love tomatoes because they are healthy and crunchy.

Favourite food:

Vicky”s fave food is Macaroone Cheese because it taste beautiful & yummy and also it is very cheesy. (We have the heaps of common things that we like are basicly the same.)

             

Favourite colour:

Vicky’s fave colour is purple and it is also my favourite colour.Vicky likes purple because it is the colour of joy the same as me.I also like purple because it reminds me of the cadbury factory.The real reason why vicky likes purple is because it is an elegant colour and it is pretty.Vicky fave flower are Bluebells and she really likes the colour because it is purple.

When Vicky grows up she wants to be:

A singer because it is one of her hobbies and she also like to make up song’s. She also adores Selena gomez.

Evaluation:

Overall, Vicky is very unique and is a very friendly person & a great friend. She is also my friend.

By Sebaan Hub 3

descriptive writing about Daniella

Intro

Daniella is new to Learning Hub 3 and has been making new friends with the older learners. If you’d like to know more about why you should be friends with Daniella, have a read of this and you will see how amazing she is.

Looks

Daniella is a pretty girl! She has short dark red hair. Her hair emphasizes her nice oval face. She has hazel eyes, long eyelashes and she has beautiful smile. She is tall for her age. Also she is a sociable  girl because she can easily communicate with others.      

Family

Daniella has a very good family. Her mum is a nice person. Her name is Evelyn. Her dad’s name is Aston. She has a young sister, she is 18 months old (she is very cute). Her sister’s name is Kaylee. Daniella has a old brother, Tearno, who is 11 years old. Her family also includes her pets. Her pets are dog and pony.

Hobbies and about her pets

Daniella  favorite hobby is riding on her pony. She rides on her pony whenever she wants. Her parents bought the pony for Daniella when she was 8 years old. Her pony’s name is a Peanut, she sometimes calls her sweetheart. Her Pony is a very beautiful flea bitten gray (which means white with brown spots). Also, Daniella has a dog. The dog’s name is Puppy.

She likes to spend her time with her friends. In sport she likes to play netball and table tennis.

Conclusion

Now you know more about Daniela. I think you can easily communicate with her and be good friend.

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Description about Silas

I’m writing a description about my friend silas he came to stonefields

Looks

Silas has brown eyes he has short thick black hair.

he has brown skin. he’s build as a rugby player. He has dry lips and brown skin.

Family

Silas was born in Auckland, New Zealand but he’s Maori and Samoan. His dad Lawrence is Maori  his mum Anna is Samoan  so that means Silas is Samoan and Maori.He has 2 sisters and a stepsister Silas as a sister that is one year older she is in the same class as Silas.His cousin's name is Hillary and shes a girl she is the same year as Hope.Silas has a big family they have a grey car and they live in saint johns so Silas comes from his house to our school come to our School.

Doing

Silas loves sports, especially rugby. He is the 2nd best  runner in this school so this helps him when he is playing rugby to play hard and score tries. His favourite food is  his Mum's lasagna, Silas likes shooting arrows with a bin bow. Silas has black  shoes

he really doesn't like running in his shoes and he doesn’t like Soccer balls. He is a fitness organiser for our class but he doesn't do it everyday because other intermediate kids are a fitness organiser aswell , When Silas grows up he wants to join the All Blacks and participate in the rugby. He has lots of friends sometimes they play touch all together they are all really good.Silas use determination when he plays arm wrestling I was shocked when Silas vs two year 8 girls at a time he uses other qualities as well.

This is a description all about Silas.

He is a good student.

                       

Descriptive Writing : Michaela Ceniza

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Introduction

On October 13, 2000, a baby girl was born and her name was Michaela.  Michaela is now a 12 year old girl who lives in Mt. Wellington. She goes to Stonefields Primary School and she is a year 8 student. She comes from the Philippines.

Looks

Michaela has short  black hair like me. She wears glasses. She ties her hair in a tidy ponytail everyday. She wears a ‘z’ silver earrings that stands for Zayn Malik from one Direction. She has thin hair and tanned skin. Michaela is tall and smart. She lives in an ordinary house. She has big round eyes, and also has very long lashes, longer than mine.

Personality

Michaela is very funny and she is the kind of person you want to go to when you need help. She is an energetic girl and she loves to play netball. Michaela is also an upbeat person. She loves it when you make funny jokes. Michaela loves the colour Purple and Baby blue. She likes to wear ordinary shorts and t-shirts. She has short sided bangs.  Michaela like to stay organised and she also likes to be tidy. Michaela said that one day she would like to be a chef/cook. She also said that she made a bucket list on last night, which sounds pretty awesome. She also loves taking care of little kids.

Family

Michaela was born on October 13, 2000, she is made here in New Zealand, if you know what I mean she’s a test tube baby. She Is the only child in the family and wants to have a baby brother. Her father’s name is Francisco Ceniza Jr. and her mom’s name is Isabelita Ceniza, her stepfather’s name is Jaime Dizon. Eventually, Michaela said that she has round about ‘100’ cousins and its growing.. She is a catholic and she goes to the church of St. Mary with her family.

Likes and Dislikes

Michaela likes to hang out with her friends in the weekends. During morning tea time and lunchtime she always plays netball with her friends. She likes to play volleyball, tennis, and soccer. At home in her free time she spends her time watching tv, reading books, tidying her room and surfing the internet. Her favorite food is pasta, and pizzas. Eventually, she said that she likes all kinds of food. She is a lunch buddy monitor every Wednesday. Michaela likes to do ice skating. She also likes to hang out with her friends and family in Sylvia Park. Michaela loves singing to the songs of One Direction and Fifth Harmony, her favourite bands. She is a systematic and a sociable person. Michaela loves to travel around the world. Because of this, she would like to learn new languages that she can use when she gets to meet new people that doesn’t speak English or Tagalog (Philippine language). She also said that she wants to cruise around Europe one day.

Overall, Michaela is a sweet loving person. She loves to experience lots of adventure. Michaela loves to have fun and she is the type of person that you would want to talk to if you are down or lonely.

Description of Alina

Description

Intro

Alina is a girl from Kazakhstan,it is a country near Russia,she was also born in Kazakhstan.She was born on 5th June 2001 and she has a 8 month old brother and his birthday is on 16 June 2012 and he was born in New Zealand.

Hobbies

Alina likes doing sport and her favourite sport is net ball.Somethings that Alina likes are cooking and baking likes cooking and baking also.Some of the things that she doesn’t like is shooting the goal in netball.One of her chores are to put the dishes in the dishwasher.

Family

And now Alina’s family,Alina’s dad’s name is Alex,her mum’s name is Barbara and her brothers name is Daniel and he is 8 months.She has 2 rabbits 1 is white and brown and 1 is black and 1 dog in Kazakhstan called Rapunzel.Alina is 11 years old and she is turning 12 on 5 July.

Looks

Alina has long,dark brown hair.She has brown eyes and she is very pretty.She has medium eyelashes.She is Russian so she has a white face you have dark pink lips and she has a oval head.She has long nails and she is going to cut her nails soon.

Conclusion

Alina’s star sign is Gemini and her birthstone is Pearl.Alina is really pretty and really nice.You should try being her friend she will talk to you a lot.She will help you when you are stuck in the pit.Alina is Christian. Thanks For Reading!!!

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Alvin’s life

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I have a classmate and his named is Alvin. He’s 10 years of age, he goes to Stonefields School, he use to go to Tsinghua International School in Beijing, China.  He’s year 6. He is full chinese.

Alvin has black thin short hair. He needs glasses to see clearly. He has dark brown eyes. he has fair, he has reddish lips and he has short thin lashes. He does not like to barefoot.

Alvin’s favourite sport is swimming. His favorite food is pizza, eventually he said, he likes all the kinds of pizzas. Alvin`s favorite movie is Adventures of TinTin. Alvins favourite colour is red. His favorite job at home is to sweep the floor.

 

Alvin was born on October 11, 2002. His mum’s name is Ying Liu and his fathers name Bin Chen. He is the oldest in the family and  he has a younger brother named Yu Xuan Chen and he is 2 years old.

This is a description about Alvin.Have fun reading it.:).

Descriptive writing about Tobais

ALL ABOUT TOBIAS

Tobias is 11 years old and lives in Pakuranga. He likes watching movies from the 70s the 80s and the 90s.

Looks

Tobias has short, thick, light brown hair and hazel green eyes. He is 140cm tall he wears the stonefields school uniform and has one button up on his shirt . The previous school that he used to go was Meadowbank.

Doing

In his spare time he likes to hangout with his family and friends. Also play’s minecraft and spends time with his dog and also likes reading books like Alex rider and action books. His favorite food is pie, carrot and cake. On Mondays he goes to karate and practices at the moment he is a green belt.

Family and early life

He was born in lowestoft England. He came to new zealand in 2007. Tobias doesn't play any sports but watch’s rugby on the TV. His mum’s works in hub 1 and she is called miss Jackson . Tobias came to this school in 2011 in term 4.Tobias likes going to stonefields school..   

Evaluation

Tobias has short light brown and is 140cm tall Tobias loves to play minecraft. Also hangs out with his family and friends. He was born in lowestoft England he doesn't play sports and Tobias likes going to stonefields school.

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Rosie’s life

Rosie goes to Stonefields School. She is a hub 3 student. She is new to Stonefields School. Rosie is 10 years old now. She is in year 6. And now I will tell you all about her!

Rosie has long hair, the color of it is blonde. She likes wearing shoes better than bare feet. The color of her skin is white. She likes to wear stylish sandals and covered shoes. She has bluey green eyes.

Rosie’s family is from Ireland, but she is born in New Zealand. Her last name is miles. Her family lives in 54 Stone Mason Ave, Stonefields. Her old school was Pt England. Her dad’s name is Gilbert, and her mum’s name is Tinna. Her family likes to go out shopping, and likes eating at home.

She likes to play computer games, like minecraft, world of warcraft.......... She likes to watch movies, her favorite movie is adventures of tintin. Rosie`s favorite fruit is strawberries. Her favorite food is Spaghetti bolognese. Her favorite subject is Maths. Her favorite sport is Cheerleading.

What she looks like, what she likes, what her family likes to do....... This is a description all about Rosie. Hope you enjoy reading it. Have fun:).

18.3.13 Descriptions

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Shakeel is 9 years old. He is a year 5 and he goes to Stonefields School.

Shakeel has short, black hair he has a haircut like Sonny bill williams. Shakeel has brown eyes. He is small but strong. He looks really determined. When there are arm wrestling competitions, Shakeel sometimes wins against bigger kids. Shakeel has brown skin. Shakeel has a playstation 3 and his favourite game to play on it is black ops 1. Shakeel likes to read chapter books his favourite book is Diary of a Wimpy kid.

Shakeel is from the Cook Islands but was born in New Zealand.  His last name is Ali and Ali means when someone get married to its future wife he will have to change his last name to her last name. The college that Shakeel is going to Lynnfield college in Mount Roskill. He is going to Lynnfield college because his step Dad lives in Mount Roskill. Shakeel’s parents name is Ani, Joseph and his stepdad Aneez. The other reason that Shakeel is going to lynnfield college that is brother ramise goes there .

His favourite food is lasagna. Shakeel like sport but his favorite sport to play is rugby. Shakeel loves maths and reading. He has a chromebook. His favourite  movie is Diary of a Wimpy kid 3 his favourite character is Greg and Rowley . when he gets some things to do he gets it done. The reading group he's in is Hawera.The last character book he was reading was called  the introduc.The book he is reading now is called  Robert the rat and he is enjoying the book and now he is up to character 3.

His favourite Cartoon Network program is Regular show his favorite character is Mordecai. Shakeel has a Sky HDI, his favourite channel on Sky is Cartoon Network and his other favorite channel is Boxs. He also likes to watch rugby on sky his favourite team is the All Black. When he becomes an adult he wants to be a millionaire. His other favourite channel is Tv2 and his favorite program on t.v 2 is what now his other favorite program on tv 2 is Shortland Street.

Description of Sebaan

 

     

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Description of Sebaan

Sebaan is from Wellington. Her family arrived in Auckland in 2012. She is a beautiful girl.

Sebaan has many friends at school. I am her friend, because she is helping me with my

English. Sebaan is attending dance classes.

Looks : She has long black hair. Sebaan wears a uniform in school. She has black shoes.

She has brown eyes. She has earrings but she does not wear them at school.

Family: Sebaan’s mum is a beautiful lady. Her name is Gemma. Her family lives in a house

in St Johns. Sebaan has one half sister.Her half sister’s name is Mia but she is not living with

her.  

Likes : Sebaan likes to read books. She likes to run. At school she likes to do her learning on her computer. She likes musical instruments. She also likes to play bowling with her friends.

Doesn’t like: Rock music, because is about the devil. She doesn’t like it when people are being rude and have bad manners. Also she don’t like licorice because it taste too disgusting. Sebaan also doesn’t like when people are lazy and don’t do their jobs.

Now you know more about Sebaan and you can be her friend if you want.

    

    Sir Edmund Hillary

Introduction

Edmund Hillary was born on July 20, 1919 in Auckland, New Zealand.

Edmund Hillary is a famous mountain climber, he is the first one who

reached Mount Everest. In 1992 Edmund Hillary’s face was on the

updated New Zealand $5 note.

Discovering The Heights

Hillary was a mountaineer, explorer and philanthropist.

Hillary became interested in mountaineering when he was 16 years old , in secondary school. Edmund Hillary first joined Everest expeditions in 1951 and 1952. On 29 May 1952, Hillary and Nepalese Sherpa mountaineer Tenzing Norgay became the first climbers confirmed as having reached the summit of Mount Everest.

Youth

Hillary attended Tuakau Primary School and

then at Auckland Grammar School. He studied

mathematics and science at Auckland University.

At the age of 16, his interest in climbing was sparked

during a school trip to Mount Ruapehu, and in 1939 he

completed his first major climb, reaching the summit of

Mount Ollivier, near Aoraki/Mount Cook in the Southern Alps.

Personal Life

Hillary was married two times. The first time he

brought his fate with Louise Mary Rose. They married

on 3 september 1953.  Then they  had three children Peter(*1954),

Sarah(81955) and Belinda(1959-1975). After 22 years of life Louse

and Hillary together, Louise and Belinda  were killed in a plane

crash near Kathmandu Airport shortly after the take-off. In 1989,

he then married June Mulgrew, the widow of his close friend Peter Mulgrew.

Death

On the 11th of January 2008, Hillary died because

of heart failure at the Auckland City Hospital at

around 9 in the morning (NZDT). His death was

recognised by the lowering of the flags to half-mast

on all the government and public buildings and

also at the Scott Base in Antarctica