24.6.13

WALHT write to explain

SC

• Introduction - Identifying Statement
• Explanation Sequence
• Conclusion - Summary Statement
• Punctuation/Sentences
• Individual Goal

Plan

• Intro
• Being sustainable with rubbish - what is wrong? What can we do?
• Being sustainable with fishing - what is wrong? What can we do?
• Being sustainable with shipping - what is wrong? What can we do?
• Conclusion

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How can we be sustainable around the ocean?

Sadly people have been throwing their garbage in the ocean and on the beach. When its on the beach and the tide comes up it washes to the ocean and the our sea creatures think it is food, so they eat it, get sick and die. What can we do to prevent this and help keep our ocean sustainable?

Rubbish in the Sea

people just dump rubbish in the ocean and on the beach. we need to tell people to stop.

Overfishing

People are over fishing. That mean’s we don’t have lot’s of fish and it is crell.What will happen is that people will start to lose their jobs because people are overfishing, like butchers need fish to sell and when theirs no fish they won’t have any to sell so that will make the money go down, and then we won’t have fish to eat anymore.

oil spill

there was a oil spill that spelt because ships sank and they had oil and it went all over the ocean and lot’s of fishes and other sea animals died . it was really sad.

conclishion

people have been throwing their rubbish onto the beach , and in the ocean. also on the ground, and it is going killing the sea life animal’s and they are dying. cause of our course . There was some ship that had oil on then and the senked and our sea life animal’s dies. lastly when people wash they car’s and the liquid  in the drane  and effects that sea animals.