Damien has been working on using similes in his writing and did a great job of including some descriptive word choices.
We went outside to get some new ideas and then Damien had a go at writing about a wet day here at school.
Check it out!
"At outside of the school it was a yucky weather and everything is wet. A yucky weather is rainy day and it is a very cold day that it is just cold as a fridge. It is a windy day just like a tornado and it is very strong too but it is too strong that the umbrella will blow off and gone. All the rain made a puddle and then all the puddle went into the drain and all the drain water will go to the ocean. The entire raindrop is making dripping sounds and some sounds are loud and some is light. The rain clouds are blocking the blue sky and the white clouds. The wind is blowing the branches and it is just like a moving tree."
By Damien P.
By Damien P.
