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Sunday, 14 April 2013
Saturday, 13 April 2013
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- Punctuation and Spelling
- Intro
- Characteristics
- Adjectives and nouns
- 3 bundles of facts and at least 5 sentences
- Evaluation
Description on Thomas Elva Edison
Intro.
Thomas Edison was an American Inventor and a businessman before he died. He was born in Milan but he grew in port huron he was the telephone speaker
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Looks/Personality Thomas was really old he has brown eyes like chocolate and whitish skin he also has white hair as snow he was tall he has black glasses like how midnight looks in his invention he was very charming about it .Thomas needs glasses to see properly and he also needs a stick to walk properly.
Career Thomas is an american inventor he is also a businessman in his beginning career Edison began his career as an inventor in Newark, New Jersey, with the automatic repeater and his other improved telegraphic devices, but the invention that first gained him notice was the phonograph in 1877.[29]
This accomplishment was so unexpected by the public at large as to
appear almost magical. Edison became known as "The Wizard of Menlo
Park," New Jersey.[1]
His first phonograph recorded on tinfoil around a grooved cylinder, but had poor sound quality
and the recordings could be played only a few times. In the 1880s, a
redesigned model using wax-coated cardboard cylinders was produced by Alexander Graham Bell, Chichester Bell, and Charles Tainter . This was one reason that Thomas Edison continued work on his own "Perfected Phonograph.
Early life
Thomas Edison was born in 1847 he grew in Port Huron, Michigan he was the Seventh and last child of Samuel Ogden. His mum’s name is Nancy Mathew,his father had to escape from Canada because he took part in the unsuccessful Mackenzie Rebellion of 1837. A few years before in Thomas’s class he wasn’t listening at all he was daydreamed and other stuff so his mum decided to kick him out and for him to learn at home then he learned and learned.
Evaluation Thomas
was a great leader he was very charming about his life he was a very
remarkable because he invented a lot of things and that includes his mum
as well because she taught him everything.
Thomas Edison
Friday, 12 April 2013
Description writing about Thomas Alva Edison
Edison Died October 18, 1931 (aged 84). He was very talented person because he made fantastic electric devices which are used all over the world. Thank you very much to Thomas Alva Edison.
Thomas Alva Edison
Thomas Alva Edison
Thomas Edison was born in Milan Ohio 1847 he was a businessman and a inventor he also invented new things like an phonograph and the long lasting light bulb and other things he was also very charming and serious about work and also he liked to invent new things.
Looked liked/personality
Thomas Edison had hair white as snow he had glasses black as midnight he was tall. He was a man that was very charming and very serious about his work and loved to work on his inventions and loved his job.
Early Life: His mom's name was called Nancy Matthews Elliott. In school he daydreamed and the teacher thought that he was slow so his mum kicked him out of school when he was five So she homed school him. In 1854 his family moved to Port Huron, Michigan. He also delivered newspapers and candy on trains. His father escaped to Canada because he took part in the unsuccessful Mackenzie rebellion. Thomas studied chemicals. But then he discovered his talent as a business man.
Career: Thomas Edison is an inventor his first job was an telegrapher invented the phonograph then he recreated the electric light bulb to make it last longer and invented the motion picture camera which he filmed two cats boxing and someone doing bike tricks. He also invented the electric chair and he electrocuted and elephant called Topsy on film.
Conclusion: Thomas was a great leader for various things but he is an remarkable man because he invented lots of things he said that he is inspired by his mum to be a inventor because she taught to everything and she homed school him. He was an inventor.
Thursday, 11 April 2013
Descriptive Writing: Thomas Alva Edison Sr.
Thomas Alva Edison Sr.
Introduction
Thomas was an American inventor and a businessman. Before he died, he gave us the phonograph, the transmitter for the telephone speaker, an improved long-lasting light bulb and key elements of motion-picture apparatus, as well as other bright inventions.
Look/Personality
Mr. Edison had white thin hair. He wore big black old eyeglasses. He was as big as Mr Noble. He wears suit always. He was cheeky and he had fair skin. When he was a kid he is chubby. He’s a person who’s concentrate at his work. He has a low voice. Thomas has a hearing problem on his early age.He was a person who want’s to learn new and more things.
Early life
Edison was born on February 11, 1847 in Milan, Ohio and grew up in Port Huron, Michigan. He is the seventh and the last child of Samuel Ogden Edison Jr. and Nancy Matthews Elliot.
Mr. Edison was a poor student. In school, Mr. Edison’s teacher called him addled so her mother took him out from the school and his mum proceeded to teach him at home. Edison said “my mother was the making of me”.
Edison’s family moved to Port Huron, Michigan, his life there was not that good there.
When he was 12 yrs. old, he was selling candy and newspaper on the train station. He was also selling vegetables to supplement his income. He was publishing a small newspaper ,called the Grand Trunk Herald.
Career
Edison wasn't the one who invented the lightbulb but instead he made it even better by using a carbon filament or strip coiled and he connected it to the platina contact wires.
In 1868, Thomas moved to Boston where he worked in the Western Union office and worked even more on his inventions.
In 1869, Edison resigned to his job and developed his first invention, an improved stock ticker. The Gold and Stock Telegraph Company was impressed so they paid Thomas $40, 000. Edison was just 22 that time.
In 1870, Thomas Edison set-up his own laboratory in New Jersey.
Private Life
On December 25, 1871, Edison married Mary Stilwell. She was an employee at one of his shops. They had three children named Marion Estelle Edison, Thomas Alva Edison Jr., and William Leslie Edison. Mary Edison died at the age of 29 on August 9, 1884 possibly from a brain tumor or a morphine overdose.
On February 24, 1886 at the age of 39, Edison married Mina Miller in Akron, Ohio. She was the daughter of the inventor Lewis Miller. They had three children named
Madeleine Edison, Charles Edison and Theodore Edison.
Thomas died at the age of 84 on October 18, 1931 in Llewellyn Park, New Jersey because of diabetes complications. The country dimmed their lights in his honor on the day of his funeral.
Evaluation
Without Thomas Edison, life without a good lighting is. Thomas’s inventions changed the way our world worked, he gave us some of our most prized conveniences-electricity, batteries, and even a way to listen to music. Mr. Edison got about 13 or more awards. Thomas Edison was a person who doesn’t give up easily.
He was a person who wants to learn new things and experiment to create new things.
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