Descriptive Writing about Daniel

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• Introduction
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• Adjectives
• Characteristics - 3 bundles of facts with at least 5 sentences
• Conclusion

Daniel is ten years old. He goes to Stonefields School.

Looks

Daniel has short black hair. He has black eyes. When Daniel is at school, he wears his school uniform, but he doesn’t wear shoes. Daniel is short but he is a very fast runner. His skin is brown like chocolate.

Family

Daniels mum’s name is Theresa. His dad name is Ronan. His sister’s name is Julea. She is five years old.  His uncle’s name is Ronald. His grandads name is Julio. He lives with his mum, his dad and his sister. His dad works at electrix. his sister  go to stonefields school in hub one.  He likes living with his family.His sister is sometimes nice. He lives on the Ellerslie Panmure Highway. His mum was born in the  philippines in May 23th 1979. His dad was born in the philippines on the May 16th. His sister was born on July 14th 2007. He was born on March 8th 2003.

Hobbies

Daniel likes going out to play with his bike outside. He likes ice cream, pizzas, fried rice, chocolates and chips. He likes to play rugby and basketball. He like going to school.

Daniel is a friendly boy in my hub.

By Reece

18/3/13

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Evaluation

                       

                                Lucas

Lucas is 9 and 3 quarters years old, his last name is Phan and he likes to play with Shakeel and Alvin. He also likes to eat instant noodles for breakfast, takeaways for lunch and butter chicken for for dinner. Lucas plays UNO after dinner and watched a movie before bedtime. His favourite hobby is having birthday parties with his friends.

About Him

Lucas has black, soft hair and he has brownish skin with a watch on his wrist. He wears white socks and black shoes. Lucas is shorter than me but that’s because he is younger than me. Lucas is a funny person. He tells me funny jokes and he laughs a lot. Once he said why is the elevator not going? And I said that is because someone cut the rope. But it was wrong and the answer is that nobody was in the elevator.

Family

Lucas’s dads name is Denis and Mums name is Amy. His dad works at Dads pies from  4-5 am until 5 pm. His mum works at the Meadowbank Dental Centre from 9am until 3pm. Lucas has a little sister and he loves his sister. He likes his sister when she is nice to him.

Hobbies

Lucas sometimes go to Lucas Q and Eric’s house to play and sometimes they come to his house. Lucas is a good friend and likes to see his friends lots. He likes to watch movies, catch dragonflies, draw pictures and play computer games. In the weekends he likes to go to the pool. Sometimes he likes to go to the shops with his whole family.

Lucas is the funniest friend that I ever met.

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Descriptive writing 19.3.13

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      reha*                        

Reha is a girl from Labasa in Fiji.She was born on 24’th of April in 2003.She moved to nz at 8 months. Reha has no brothers and sisters. Her favorite animal is a dog. The type of dog she likes is a golden retriever. Reha is 9 and a half. She is 10 in a month. She lives in Stonefields.

hobbies

Reha likes biking a lot. Also she likes doing art. Reha hates some types of sport, but there are some Sports she likes, such as cricket with her dad because he is good at cricket. Her dad helps her in cricket when she doesn't know what to do and helps her throw the ball. Reha like biking because she says it is very fun and  it is like fitness. She has a bike. She doesn't like to go to the BMX park on her bike.

                 

looks

Reha has dark brown eyes and black medium size hair. She wears her hair tied up in a ponytail because she says she likes to wear her hair like that. if she was in a competition she would come 1st. Reha has dark brown skin. She wears fake pearl earing. She has short eyelashes. She has 3 beauty spots. On her face and one on her leg and lastly one on her arm . She also has a fringe that she likes  to wear it on the right side of her face.

family

Reha has a dad a mum and she is the only child. Her mum’s name is Renu and her dad’s name is  Shailendra. Her family came from Fiji. Reha has 3 girl cousins and 2 boy cousins. She has 3 uncles and 3 auntys.  Her mum works at labtests. And her dad works and  Glendowie college .Her family is fun and funny she said aspherly she dad. Her family buy’s her a lot of stuff.

Reha is a very nice girl  and a great friend. She is a very lovely person who is worth getting to know.

written by Daniella

18.3.13

Description of Vicky Kralev

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Characteristics

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Introduction:

Vicky is a girl who goes to Stonefields School at the base of Mt Wellington in Auckland with me and her younger brother Tony.

Was born:

Vicky was born in Bulgaria where she grew up.Vicky was born on the 2nd of may 2003.

Is from:

Vicky and her family has immigrated to New Zealand from Sofia , Bulgaria and are now living here in Auckland with her family in a big and extraordinary house. Bulgaria is in Europe it is close to Russia, Ukraine and Turkey.  I think it is a Gigantic move compared to my move.Vicky and her family (Not including her cousin)have been in Auckland & New Zealand for 6 month’s.

Look’s like:

Vicky has dark mouse hair it is also straight it is short as well. She has Light skin & dark brown eyes.  She is very tall and slim that she would make a great basketball player. She has a very big smile that is a bit like a banana.

Family:

In her family is her brother Tony her Mum Chrissy and her Dad Svetlozar. She has a cousin named Kalina who is 3 yrs. old, and is also very cute.

Likes:

Vicky likes Listening to music. She is interested in reading also likes skyping and talking to her friends in Bulgaria so they can keep in touch and to see how things have changed.Vicky also likes going to the library and getting lot’s of book’s to read.

Does not like:

Vicky hate’s tomatoes Because they taste yuck (Vicky),but I love tomatoes because they are healthy and crunchy.

Favourite food:

Vicky”s fave food is Macaroone Cheese because it taste beautiful & yummy and also it is very cheesy. (We have the heaps of common things that we like are basicly the same.)

             

Favourite colour:

Vicky’s fave colour is purple and it is also my favourite colour.Vicky likes purple because it is the colour of joy the same as me.I also like purple because it reminds me of the cadbury factory.The real reason why vicky likes purple is because it is an elegant colour and it is pretty.Vicky fave flower are Bluebells and she really likes the colour because it is purple.

When Vicky grows up she wants to be:

A singer because it is one of her hobbies and she also like to make up song’s. She also adores Selena gomez.

Evaluation:

Overall, Vicky is very unique and is a very friendly person & a great friend. She is also my friend.

By Sebaan Hub 3

descriptive writing about Daniella

Intro

Daniella is new to Learning Hub 3 and has been making new friends with the older learners. If you’d like to know more about why you should be friends with Daniella, have a read of this and you will see how amazing she is.

Looks

Daniella is a pretty girl! She has short dark red hair. Her hair emphasizes her nice oval face. She has hazel eyes, long eyelashes and she has beautiful smile. She is tall for her age. Also she is a sociable  girl because she can easily communicate with others.      

Family

Daniella has a very good family. Her mum is a nice person. Her name is Evelyn. Her dad’s name is Aston. She has a young sister, she is 18 months old (she is very cute). Her sister’s name is Kaylee. Daniella has a old brother, Tearno, who is 11 years old. Her family also includes her pets. Her pets are dog and pony.

Hobbies and about her pets

Daniella  favorite hobby is riding on her pony. She rides on her pony whenever she wants. Her parents bought the pony for Daniella when she was 8 years old. Her pony’s name is a Peanut, she sometimes calls her sweetheart. Her Pony is a very beautiful flea bitten gray (which means white with brown spots). Also, Daniella has a dog. The dog’s name is Puppy.

She likes to spend her time with her friends. In sport she likes to play netball and table tennis.

Conclusion

Now you know more about Daniela. I think you can easily communicate with her and be good friend.

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Description about Silas

I’m writing a description about my friend silas he came to stonefields

Looks

Silas has brown eyes he has short thick black hair.

he has brown skin. he’s build as a rugby player. He has dry lips and brown skin.

Family

Silas was born in Auckland, New Zealand but he’s Maori and Samoan. His dad Lawrence is Maori  his mum Anna is Samoan  so that means Silas is Samoan and Maori.He has 2 sisters and a stepsister Silas as a sister that is one year older she is in the same class as Silas.His cousin's name is Hillary and shes a girl she is the same year as Hope.Silas has a big family they have a grey car and they live in saint johns so Silas comes from his house to our school come to our School.

Doing

Silas loves sports, especially rugby. He is the 2nd best  runner in this school so this helps him when he is playing rugby to play hard and score tries. His favourite food is  his Mum's lasagna, Silas likes shooting arrows with a bin bow. Silas has black  shoes

he really doesn't like running in his shoes and he doesn’t like Soccer balls. He is a fitness organiser for our class but he doesn't do it everyday because other intermediate kids are a fitness organiser aswell , When Silas grows up he wants to join the All Blacks and participate in the rugby. He has lots of friends sometimes they play touch all together they are all really good.Silas use determination when he plays arm wrestling I was shocked when Silas vs two year 8 girls at a time he uses other qualities as well.

This is a description all about Silas.

He is a good student.

                       

Descriptive Writing : Michaela Ceniza

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Introduction

On October 13, 2000, a baby girl was born and her name was Michaela.  Michaela is now a 12 year old girl who lives in Mt. Wellington. She goes to Stonefields Primary School and she is a year 8 student. She comes from the Philippines.

Looks

Michaela has short  black hair like me. She wears glasses. She ties her hair in a tidy ponytail everyday. She wears a ‘z’ silver earrings that stands for Zayn Malik from one Direction. She has thin hair and tanned skin. Michaela is tall and smart. She lives in an ordinary house. She has big round eyes, and also has very long lashes, longer than mine.

Personality

Michaela is very funny and she is the kind of person you want to go to when you need help. She is an energetic girl and she loves to play netball. Michaela is also an upbeat person. She loves it when you make funny jokes. Michaela loves the colour Purple and Baby blue. She likes to wear ordinary shorts and t-shirts. She has short sided bangs.  Michaela like to stay organised and she also likes to be tidy. Michaela said that one day she would like to be a chef/cook. She also said that she made a bucket list on last night, which sounds pretty awesome. She also loves taking care of little kids.

Family

Michaela was born on October 13, 2000, she is made here in New Zealand, if you know what I mean she’s a test tube baby. She Is the only child in the family and wants to have a baby brother. Her father’s name is Francisco Ceniza Jr. and her mom’s name is Isabelita Ceniza, her stepfather’s name is Jaime Dizon. Eventually, Michaela said that she has round about ‘100’ cousins and its growing.. She is a catholic and she goes to the church of St. Mary with her family.

Likes and Dislikes

Michaela likes to hang out with her friends in the weekends. During morning tea time and lunchtime she always plays netball with her friends. She likes to play volleyball, tennis, and soccer. At home in her free time she spends her time watching tv, reading books, tidying her room and surfing the internet. Her favorite food is pasta, and pizzas. Eventually, she said that she likes all kinds of food. She is a lunch buddy monitor every Wednesday. Michaela likes to do ice skating. She also likes to hang out with her friends and family in Sylvia Park. Michaela loves singing to the songs of One Direction and Fifth Harmony, her favourite bands. She is a systematic and a sociable person. Michaela loves to travel around the world. Because of this, she would like to learn new languages that she can use when she gets to meet new people that doesn’t speak English or Tagalog (Philippine language). She also said that she wants to cruise around Europe one day.

Overall, Michaela is a sweet loving person. She loves to experience lots of adventure. Michaela loves to have fun and she is the type of person that you would want to talk to if you are down or lonely.